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October 21, 2012
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Sep 26, 2012, 12:52:59 AM
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Photography: :iconkendra-paige:
Model & MUA: Iliana Rivera

From our Dita von Teese inspired shoot. Looking forward to our Halloweenie entry! Feedback is always greatly appreciated. :heart:

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Mood: Wow! ~SantanaPhantom Jun 4, 2013  New member Student Photographer
it´s perfect
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*Blossom-Lullabies May 9, 2013   Photographer
Really elegant pose, costume and make up. Again a good work and capture from you :clap: And the retouche is just awesome, there is not too much contrast between all the colours, it's just in harmony :)
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Your work is featured in my "PICTURES OF AN EXHIBITION 2013 - Part I"...maybe you like it!
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:iconirxdesign:
~IRXDESIGN Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautiful :blowkiss:
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:icongloomyprincess:
Hi ! I'm here to give you some FeedbackFrenzy critique =)

This a very glamorous pin-up like photo and one sees immediatly the Dita inspiration.
I will give you my feeling more precisely.

The strength of the picture are the red lips contrasting with white teeth. For this contrast purpose the teeth may be lighten a bit.I also think that the violet tone of the background and thus of skin is not the best for this kind of lipstick. Keeping the white background as in Fierce for exemple would enhance the red and give an healthier tone to the skin.

So for me the main weakness of the photo is the light and moreover the shadows. The right side is all darken by a diffuse shadow that avoid the model to stand out from the back ground. Enhancing the white and the contrast may give a more define look to the photo.

Finally, about the composition and the pose. It could look better if it was croped a bit more on the left and a bit more to the right : what we want to see is more of the model, who minds the background ? =D
Because her fingers are stuck together the glove makes her hand look a bit like a crow, which is a shame.

So this is a really good fashion series with a beautiful model but Porcelain is not my favorite piece of it though still very elegant and glamorous.
I hope my feedback can help !
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~xPolyplusUttyx Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sooo SEXY beautiful
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:icontrisste:
*Trisste Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I thought of Dita von Teese even before reading your "artist comments". Great job! :heart:
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:iconkendra-paige:
`Kendra-Paige Nov 28, 2012   Photographer
That's awesome! You're the first to see it, haha. The model will surely appreciate it as much as I do. :heart:
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~XxiLive4SeddieXx Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Stunning!
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:iconkendra-paige:
`Kendra-Paige Nov 8, 2012   Photographer
Thank you! :heart:
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