Hi ! I'm here to give you some FeedbackFrenzy critique
This a very glamorous pin-up like photo and one sees immediatly the Dita inspiration. I will give you my feeling more precisely.
The strength of the picture are the red lips contrasting with white teeth. For this contrast purpose the teeth may be lighten a bit.I also think that the violet tone of the background and thus of skin is not the best for this kind of lipstick. Keeping the white background as in Fierce for exemple would enhance the red and give an healthier tone to the skin.
So for me the main weakness of the photo is the light and moreover the shadows. The right side is all darken by a diffuse shadow that avoid the model to stand out from the back ground. Enhancing the white and the contrast may give a more define look to the photo.
Finally, about the composition and the pose. It could look better if it was croped a bit more on the left and a bit more to the right : what we want to see is more of the model, who minds the background ? Because her fingers are stuck together the glove makes her hand look a bit like a crow, which is a shame.
So this is a really good fashion series with a beautiful model but Porcelain is not my favorite piece of it though still very elegant and glamorous. I hope my feedback can help !
I love your pictures and the model. She is absolutely stunning and very well suited for vintage style portraits. Quite frankly there is not much for improvement as in my opinion it's great. You just hit the sweet spot like 30 billion times. That's how much I love these portraits with her or any pictures with her in it. She's amazing and your photography skills are amazing. Keep up the good work. No scratch that, keep up the wonderful work.
Thank you so much, that's really very flattering! Iliana's going to be my model for the next Let's Learn Portraiture! tutorial I'll be writing, and I'll be featuring her in my Halloweenie Contest submission. Hope you enjoy those as well!