I think everyone has noticed the same thing in this photo: eyes.
Sure, I have not only fixed that and for this reason I am making this critique.
I have been fascinated by hair color, background, clothes and his eyes, in that order. The hair is red because I've always dreamed of and to have it so, because the background is green and I love that color, because it is beautiful clothing and eyes because they shine.
You're very lucky to be able to take pictures as well, to have models that are so beautiful and have yourself a great eye for these photos as good.
I don't think you understand what I mean much, but I hope I have helped and have done my best, because I only speak a little English.